Paper 1 – Analysing advertisement reflection

What i need to improve on

  • make points of interpretation instead of just description
  • deeper unpacking on the language is needed
  • Dont use general terms – be specific about the context
  • be careful in the phrasing – make the point i am making clear
  • the woman is not real, she is characterise to fit the purpose
    – can soup which means woman can use the time to prepare food more efficiently on making herself look more beautiful
  • look for repetitions and patterns – there was a recurring theme of home
  • In the introduction, i need to make what my interpretation of the advertisement is
  • A lot of the time i assume that the person reading my essay will understand me; i need to explain my points a little more
  • grammar, punctuation
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