Feedback:
- Assimilate and link the features to the main big ideas at all time
- clearer bigger idea
- more techniques identified: personification
Good:
- better key ideas and observations!
- clear explanations and structure
Feedback:
Good:
夕顔:https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1dTVBWZznbYfbI5zzHZ-OYasu1Up-1DcXTYWbOiSV4iI/edit
ノート:https://docs.google.com/document/d/10a-aYOQCpC0-OiQi40mvNxeqhGIeVSNZFTxszEeBCDQ/edit
プレゼンテーションhttps://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1TMnDl_5QAW5SrCQpOCv4am0cdW_bcYgbmkwU0J1weDw/edit
ノート
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1CjrUIgGfI-oM23q9wbQ2gE25-iM18Y4b5McJfp0ZVYc/edit
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RIz7Y-93bvUcLTK5BxdjJdjvervVLIpcjyPKd736liQ/edit
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dnMgI7umnbo7wfT89n6_ouhRPDo3oZRhhuZGpTI7mMQ/edit
Context
The epigraph
There is a characteristics that we can recognise over Lisa Donnelly’s body of works