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- more techniques identified: personification
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Context
The epigraph
There is a characteristics that we can recognise over Lisa Donnelly’s body of works
Today we analysed one of Patrick Chappatte, a cartoonist’s cartoon on climate change.
He is a cartoonist who draws cartoon about social justice (he has a liberal view)
Cartoon as a medium
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Global Issue Culture, Identity and Community |
Focus Question or Topic Representation of women within these two texts |
Texts Chosen (screenshot of cartoon and name of poem) Poem: Mrs Darwin Cartoon: |
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Introduction (include context) to both texts and bodies of work by each author I would like to explore ‘Mrs Darwin’ by carol Anne Duffy and ‘Cemetery of women’ by Lisa Donnelly. ‘Mrs Darwin’ is a poem written by Carol Anne Duffy is an extract from a poetry collection called “The World’s Wife”. A lot of her poem presents the western patriarchal society from the women’s point of view. One of which is ‘Mrs Darwin’ which focuses on the representation of the identity of women, written in a short diary form from the perspective of Mrs Darwin who is a wife of a scientist that discovered the theory of evolution. Lisa Donnelly is a cartoonist whose body of work consists of simple line drawings, some short dialogue and makes a point about the patriarchal society through humour. ‘Cemetery of Women’ is one of her cartoons that puts its emphasis on the same theme as the poetry ‘Mrs Darwin’. The way in which the women are portrayed is by their role in the society rather than as individuals.
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Text 1: Thesis overview in relation to focus This poem portrays Mrs Darwin’s frustration in the difference in ways in which women and men are recognised and identified. |
Text 1: 3 Main compositional/textual features
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Text 2: Thesis overview in relation to focus This cartoon portrays how afterdeath, women are only recognised and remembered by their role as a wife and mother, rather than by their individuality. Their identity is being taken over by their role in society and that is portrayed here. |
Text 2: 3 Main compositional/textual features
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Concluding point (link both texts) in relation to focus This reinforces the social stereotype of women as housewives, who serves men. Both Lisa Donnelly and Carol Ann Duffy draw attention to this social idea, while using humour and insult to reduce the severity of the claim. |
Thesis: Carol Ann Duffy’s collection of ‘The World’s Wife’ explores the timeless and universal issues of gender roles and social constructs, such as expectations of masculinity in man and motherhood through allusion to well known texts.