I was able to analyze and pick up points from the image well, but next time will need to relate it to the wider and bigger concepts in depth. I should also try to write a better thesis next time to have a more clear idea of what my essay is going to talk about. I also need to spend more time on the annotation in order to work out my ideas and thinking which would have helped develop them. It was an improvement from my first attempt which was 11/20, and I got 13/20 this time which is a little bit of an improvement, and my goal for the next test would be to get to that next level which is at least 14/20 to achieve a 6.
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