By writing this TOK essay it did not go well from the start to the end to me. I was not certain of what to write in terms of AOKs and WOKs. The example was never clarified and no citations were given due to the general confusion going on in the essay. The main reason may be based that I followed the structure of an older paper and eventually it confused me of what to write, and when writing the essay, I feel generally confused.

I would give myself a score of basic if not rudimentary, due to the lack of content in the actual essay, where one write 1100 words without know what one is writing about.