Nov 15th 2019 Goal setting for HumanityColla

Nov 15th 2019 Goal setting for Humanity

During the humanity classes, we have done three tasks and assessment so far which is a group presentation, a personal presentation and an essay during ours development unit.

 

In the form below, I am going to set up goals for each criteria in ATL based on my behaviours in these three assessments in order to improve for next time.

 

I have chosen the goals for each criterion referenced to the feedback by the teacher and my personal understandings of performance. 

 

Collaboration (countries group presentation) Communication (Group or SDG presentation) Attachments 

(SDG essay)

Goal To be better organized and prepared for group presentation. Be more confident on the stage  To use accurate and suitable language and references when performed the essay. 
Action
  • Organize time to meet with group members outside of classroom
  • Update and talk to group members to see if they have ideas for me to improve
  • Use social media s.g.whatsapp to communicate and plan about the time organization such as the time for the last edit.
  • Using body language like hand gestures
  • Use enthusiasm and positive voice and avoiding monotone.
  • Rehearse a few more times to become more familiar with the contents prepared so I will be able to have more eye contact with audiences since my own understandings towards topic allowed me to use own words to explain when I look at the audiences.
  • Find more sources and references when I determined the topic and structures before starting to write an essay. 
  • Read aloud if the environment allowed or silent read the whole passage after finish writing the whole essay to check grammar mistakes and inaccurate vocabs. 
Indicators
  • The group will present a fluent, well organized presentation to educate and engage with audiences.
  • In teacher’s feedback, the 
  • I would present myself as a more confident and well prepared image in the following presentations.
  • There will be less grammar mistakes and will have more reliable sources in my essay next time.

Self evaluation of the SDG’s presentation in Humanity

The SDG presentation task is a assigned work in our humanity class, Mr.Hannah have assigned each of us with one sustainable sustainable goal which was created by the UN in 2015, aim to reach these goals to achieve a better and more sustainable future for all By the year 2030.

In the class, I have assigned Goal 8–Decent work and and economic growth. We are going to do a 2 minutes presentation in the following class to convince other people ours goal deserves the most fonds by the govern. I prepared it at home, first trying to find the logic and arrange the structures of the essay. I decided to write the body paragraph in two sections- importance and the reason for govern to invest most. I researched the meaning of some terms in order to find a easier explanation at first. After that, I researched why is my goal important based on some statistics and evidences. At last, for the second paragraph and the conclusion, I mentioned that without my goal, other goals are not able to be achieved as well.

I think I have succeeded that I was less nerves than last group presentation which shows that I have overcome my fears in some extent. My voice was not as shaked as last time and I found out that I started to adapt speaking on stage slowly. I also mentioned the interrelations with two factors and the relationships between my goals and all other global goals as well.

For the things to improve, I found out that my presentation doesn’t show enough suitable evidences in the right place to support my statement hence sometimes my ideas sounds too weak that it became untrusted for other people. When there are no reliable sources and no reference, it is hard to say if statements are made up by myself or not for audiences. I also lacked some eye contacts with audiences since I was not confident to speak in my own words but has to rely on my notes. I need to practice and rehearsed more for next time since sometimes my pronunciation doesn’t sound clear and accurate when I am nervous. I would like to see myself memorize the main ideas of the script and would be able to talk based on my understandings toward the theme of the presentation, gain more confidence, pronounce words clearer and more accurate and act more positive when I speak so I don’t sound like a monotone that made audiences feeling bored.