Having engaged in a meeting with my EE supervisor, there are strengths and improvements that still need to be made to improve my EE. It was described to be a strong first draft that could already be submitted as a final. However, fundamental issues are still preventing me from obtaining a high grade. I need to conduct fundamental requirements such as utilising better in-text citations to ensure I properly meet the guidelines of the Extended Essay.
My EE still requires an effective methodology that properly analyses the limitations of my research and still requires specific points made in my EE to be further elaborated to improve the overall analysis and evaluation of my current topic. I need to better mention how slash-and-burning is a common problem all around the world. However, only the most significant impacts have been caused by Indonesia, which is why I decided to focus on Indonesia More Global Political concepts are needed, like the concept of securitisation and how that relates to the issue of slash-and-burning in Indonesia, to further demonstrate my understanding of the subject. (180 words)