You clearly described each of the stakeholders perspectives and influences and had clear and realistic, solutions to the specific Human Rights violations. However I feel that you could have expand more when you mention your change in perspective, and why your personal culture has helped you to think that way.
You clearly described each of the stakeholders perspectives and influences and had clear and realistic, solutions to the specific Human Rights violations. However I feel that you could have expand more when you mention your change in perspective, and why your personal culture has helped you to think that way.