I am actually happy with what I got in Q1 during the exam. I actually got a lot higher than I expected, mainly because I was able to put many points in each paragraph. Since I was a bit behind on the time, I was rushing a lot which made the quality really low. But, I got marks down for the quality of my answer as the paragraph and sentence structure was low. In my second try, I think I improved in the sense of the quality of my answer but I think the content was the same. I was not able to gain more points for the content. I have learnt that we have to explain each point and that we also have to watch our quality of the writing, not only the context.