After I conducted more research I learned that my research question is incorrect and needs to be slightly changed due it being factually incorrect. The resources I used were mainly from an Israeli perspective and once I read Palestinian perspectives, I was able to see where I was wrong.
I am proud of completing my thesis as I usually have the hardest time formulating a thesis. Although it has to be slightly changed, I think having a thesis is extremely important for me because I usually go off track. So, having a thesis that I can keep referring back to will help me possibly.
I plan to still continue doing my research and writing my essay. For the 1000 word submission, I would like to focus on my body paragraphs. As its usually my body paragraphs that are weaker than my conclusions and introductions. I’d also like to focus on adding quantitative evidence.
