Mock Paper 1

Looking back at my paper 1, there were a few targets I had. One of my biggest ones was to explore more of the conventions of the text. I struggled to do this on the cartoon mainly because I was not too familiar with many of the techniques and was more so trying to to use techniques that I was familiar with. However, I mentioned this anyway in my texts and made it clear when I was referring to certain main techniques of the text.

Something else I wanted to work on was my nuance. Both nuance of interpretation and also various potential audiences. I managed to do the audience variation in both texts by highlighting a primary and a secondary audience. I think though I showed different interpretations, that I only ever did it vary randomly and needed to be more consistent with it.

Something I did not think about was perhaps evaluating the effectiveness of various parts of the text. For example, I could have expanded on how useful the text was at the front of the first text to illustrate the issue. I think I simply need to look at what I have stated the purpose to be and to what extent the text aligns with that.

Overall, I think I need to be more succinct as well because I spend too much time expanding in certain ideas when there is perhaps a way for me to be more precise with what I am trying to say. This will also just give me more time to focus on some ideas that I want to go deeper into. I also feel like with this extra time I could plan more because that was something I struggled with and had to start writing ASAP.

Overall, I think this exam allowed me to see where I could have improved on my time management. Also I feel like in the exam itself I developed new strategies of how to merge techniques and share evidence to avoid repeating quotes.

My targets:

  • Nuance of interpretation
  • Being precise and succinct
  • Using textual conventions

Final Reflection Kahaani

LO7-Recognise and consider the ethics implications of choices and actions

Once again, I am going back to the initial learning outcome that I had set for myself. I think in this case I have been successful at recognising my role in the ethical implications of the dance. Also because we are directly sponsoring a service I thought it was very importance for us to be mindful at all stages.

I really loved the dances that we did as well because they were very graceful and I enjoyed replicating some of the things I learnt as a classical dancer. I think Kahaani is an event that I always look forward to because of how much it reminds me of the Indian dance that I used to do.

I really enjoyed the experience.

MidWay Reflection

We are midway through our progess as we will be performing in January. I think so far I have been quite critical at looking as to how are dances are showcasing our perspective of disabled people. I think my dance leaders have been very respectfully and thought thoroughly about the consequences of the steps we do and the songs we use. So far we are making steady problems though sometimes I do feel as though we could be more effective with the rehearsal time we have such as by more people learning the steps beforehand and then coming to practice.

Evidence:

First Reflection

LO7-Recognise and consider the ethics implications of choices and actions

This year I am yet again participating in Kahaani which is our all India dance showacse in which we help a global concern known as Kolkata GC. I am super excited to be doing it again bvecause I did it last year and I am ready to once again dance in fornt of what will hopefully be a live audience.

The dance I am a part of this year is inspired by the movie Taare Zameen Parr which looks at the struggles of a disabled boy and because of this I believe that I need to look at the ethical implications and choices that come with us portraying disabled people because there are so many stereotypes and misconceptions in the media.

Conceptual Thinking

Human Acts & Handmaid’s Tale

I think something I find as a huge linking point between the two is the idea of representation, how fiction can truly represent reality. Perhaps this idea is obvious in Human Acts which on its own is based off of real life events meaning the fiction was based off of real events, however in the Handmaid’s tale although the representation of misogyny is evidently drastic, the values held by certain characters seem to reflect what we are seeing in society now. That idea that one author is showing us what the world is and the other is representing what the world could be gives us a spectrum of how our actions and choices now will have an effect on our society in the future. I especially think it is interesting to look at the representation of the characters. Although in both stories the main characters are in harsh environments, none are portrayed to be damsels in distress. Even in Human Acts, where many characters have been tortured and hurt, we are shown their bravery and courage and made to feel proud of their choices rather than simply feeling pity. Offred is also not the typical oppressed woman that complains about the discrimination she faces, rather we get to see her critical thinking and intelligent nature as she persists in Gilead.

How do literary texts help our understanding of non literary texts?

One of the biggest ideas that I think I have gained greater appreciation for is that of who’s perspective a message is told from. In literary texts, we learn so much about how the narrative perspective influences the story. We have seen unreliable narrators such as Kathy in NLMG and various narrative perspectives in Human Acts and how these affect the way the story is told. Similarly in non literary texts such as movies, cartoons and anything visual, who’s perspective we see the situation from makes such a different to what we see and how we interpret it as readers. We could be a third party that sees a situation, or some authors give us a character’s perspective to understand the scenario better. This is something I found very interesting my exploration of cartoons in my HL essay, how we as an audience are strategically made to see a situation from someone’s POV.

More importantly, I’ve learnt the idea that the author’s intent can be so varying. With all the discussions we have done in class I have seen the unique ways that people have been able to receive an author’s work. That is something I learnt so much in my EE too where I had to research how academic experts may have interpreted the same text as me in a vary different manner. I really enjoy how both Lit and Non Lit texts have so much scope to be analysed and come to different conclusions. The literary technique of connotation has shown me how changing one specific word can make such a difference to meaning, the way in which changing the eye line composition or framing in a Non Lit text can completely change the message and intent.

Human Acts by Han Kang

Having started the novel Human Acts today I have a few key take aways, most of which are emotional in essence. The first is even coming to terms with the fact that an uprising happened in South Korea that most of the world is oblivious to. The way in which the government censored the truth and did not allow local journalists to educate their citizens about the truth appals me.

Another thing I found particularly interesting is how we compared the sadness in Human Acts to that of Handmaid’s Tale. I mentioned how in Handmaid’s Tale the sadness seemed to be more of frustration because we could see the progressive nature of Offred and Mayday, which meant we knew that there was hope. However with Human Acts, we are left with an empty feeling in our gut knowing that even the characters succumbed to their situation.

Something I find quite interesting is the various book covers for Human Acts. There is one of a bird sitting on a skeletal rib cage, the idea of someone’s spirit as a bird sitting on the hollow of their body. Another is that of legs that are open at the top with no body attached to it, almost symbolising the many that fell yet are not even identified, no owner to the path tread by the nameless legs.

Final reflection

We finished doing our culturama performance and it went really well. Although due to Covid 19 we were not allowed to perform in front of a live audience this year, we were still able to record the real show and make a film out of it. I think it was worth sticking with the dance and getting through all the work because it is so satisfying to see an end product that I have created.

I would have loved the opportunity to do this last year because it has taught me so many things. With long term project there will always be change and adjustments that need to be made but I need to recognise that they are okay and in many cases actually make the start product better by the end.

All in all, I am proud of how my partner and I persevered through the process to the final outcome!

MidWay Culturama Reflection

At this point my partner and I have completed the full choreography and we have began teaching it to our dancers. We do need to persevere because it is hard for some of the students to pick up on what we are teaching them and sometimes we need to slow down and wait for one of the students to catch up with what we are doing.

South African dancing has also challenged me a lot physically because it tends to be sustained levels of very high energy which I am not used to as I did classical Indian dance that tends to be slower and more mellow. I think that if I stick with it and with more practice that I will become more confident and comfortable.

Evidence

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