羊脂球 人物塑造+次要人物

1.羊脂球的人物塑造

-通过鸟先生等人恶劣态度-笑脸相迎再到不管不顾的态度转变反衬出羊脂球的善良

-正面描写+侧面描写

-作为妓女这种本应低俗的职业,在兵荒马乱的社会背景下羊脂球本身身心脱颖而出的纯洁善良

-“矮矮的身材,满身各部分全是滚圆的,胖得像是肥膘,手指头儿全是丰满之至的,丰满得在每一节小骨和另一节接合的地方都箍出了一个圈,简直像是一串短短儿的香肠似的(夸张-比喻的手法):皮肤是光润而且绷紧了的,胸脯丰满得在裙袍里突出来(形象的突出了羊脂球丰盈的体态),然而她始终被人垂涎又被人追逐,她的鲜润气色教人看了多么顺眼。她的脸蛋儿像一个发红的苹果,一朵将要开花的芍药(突出羊脂球脸的粉嫩和美丽);脸蛋儿上半段,睁着一双活溜溜的黑眼睛,四周深而密的睫毛向内部映出一圈阴影;下半段,一张妩媚的嘴,窄窄儿的和润泽得使人想去亲吻,内部露出一排闪光而且非常纤细的牙齿。”

正面外貌描写,描写出羊脂球长相外貌的美好和与黑暗社会的不符合-肖像描写与主题的联系,为什么要把她写成这样的形象?间接暗示她的人物性格,纯真善良,暗示了她是替罪羔羊牺牲品的身份

-“羊脂球一连好几次弯着身子,如同在裙子里寻找什么一样。她迟疑了一刹那,望了望同车的人,随后她安安静静挺直了身子”“羊脂球活泼泼地弯下了身子,在长凳底下抽出一个盖着白饭巾的大提蓝”

迟疑和活泼泼的对比,描写出了羊脂球内心对于分食物的心理活动,矛盾和思考

 

为什么羊脂球被安排成为妓女?

– 妓女是社会最最底层的人,莫泊桑选择了这样地位的人来抨击其他人的软弱

 

羊脂球和翠喜:对他人的赤诚之心,底层人民

全球性问题

 

 

2.选择一个次要人物,谈人物塑造以及其作用

修女

-“靠近伯爵夫人的位子上有两个嬷嬷,她们正捏着长串的念珠一面念着天父和祷告。其中一个是年老的,脸上满是麻子,仿佛她的脸上曾经很近地中了排炮的许多散子似的。另一个,很虚弱,有一个漂亮而带病态的脑袋瓜和一个显出肺病的胸脯,那正是使她们毁坏肉体而成圣徒的吃人的信仰心侵蚀了它

修女的描写是病态的,丑陋的,和修女本身这个立场和态度有了鲜明的差别,修女应该是善良高尚美丽的,但是这里对修女的描写确实丑陋病态的,与羊脂球的外貌也有鲜明的对比

教会和妓女的对比,教会:清心寡欲,剔除了人的欲望,所谓的清修的教会,但是对于修女的“没吃完的香肠又被包了起来”等行为的描写,体现出了表面的清修但是内里的坑坑洼洼,都是贪婪的人

-“但是羊脂球用一到谦卑而甜美的声音邀请两个修女来分尝她的便餐。她俩立即接受了,在含糊道了谢之后,并没有抬起眼睛就很快的吃了起来”“含糊”和“没有抬起眼睛”暗示了她们的没有礼貌,伪善,自私。之后的“祷告”是虚无的,对于哭泣的羊脂球来说,给予食物是更加直接的方式,但是她们选择了祷告而非给予食物,看出了伪善和自私。

-“两个嬷嬷本来是只在吃饭的时候才出来的,早就低着头什么也没有说。

施暴人之中时有合约的,群体暴力的人们都是自私的,修女在群体暴力中的位置是冷漠的,表面上没有直面中伤被暴力者,但是她也没有出面阻止这种暴力行为,而是任凭暴力事件发生,也是冷漠纵使惯着事情发生的人。

 

另外:

p12-“但是不久,三个贵妇人的谈话又开始了,有了这个“姑娘”在场,她们突然变成了几乎是非常亲密的朋友。觉得面对着这个毫无羞耻地卖身的女人,她们应当把有夫之妇的尊严身分结成一个团体;因为法定爱情素来高出自由爱情的头上。”很明显的反讽,人总是想要加入一个群体里,但是群体里肯定有一个施暴者,有些人为了被一个团体所接受会从而成为施暴者

伯爵-代表着上流上层社会,虚伪,表面上保持衣冠楚楚高贵的姿态,内心是虚伪肮脏自私的,语言外貌行为描写,“伯爵是个气派雍容的老绅士,他尽力修饰自己的服装以加重他和亨利四世的天然相似之点”“所以,这样一种献殷勤的事情原是您在生活当中常常遇见的,而您现在不愿接受,反而宁愿让我们留在这儿,难道想教我们也像您自己一样,来冒犯一切可以跟着普鲁士人的溃败而起的暴烈行动?””

Service reflection

We didn’t go to the children’s base after the Spring Festival holiday. Since it was a new season, some of the 10th-grade participants have changed, so we needed to tell them how to play with the children, plan the activity content, make the activity form, volunteer time and take charge of the leader based on our experience. However, due to the virus situation, our action was only planned to the point of preparing for implementation but not actually implementing, so we could only stop our service.

Paper 2 准备

范文

老师评语

1.本篇卷二论文的结构有什么特点?

结构清晰完整

层次清晰

中有转折承上启下却不偏题也不打破结构

一连串的分析赏析之后最后归于总结

2.本篇卷二论文在对文本主题内容的理解与诠释方面有哪些可取之处

理解主题内容后,联想并分析各个作品

紧扣主题同时发展文笔

3. 划出本篇论文对所评论文本文学手法的评论

“巨树”的意象,承接“水声”“清香”而来……

分析细腻得体恰当

转折承接上下文的用句“不仅……而且”之类的

4. 与自己平日所写文章相对比,本文在语言方面有哪些可以借鉴之处

自己写文章, 有些条理不清晰,分不清专业用于之类的区别和什么时候在哪里用什么词合适,比如说“伏笔”和“铺垫”之类的,运用语言不太恰当。一开始写赏析是顺着写下来,没有什么结构可言,甚至可能偏题。后来会围绕着主题走但是不够细节化,重点经常放错。有的时候只专注于用词表面美之类的而不贴合实际,仿佛是自己在写文章而不是赏析别人的文章。

  • 需要学会巧妙正确地运用专业用语
  • 用词准确恰当贴合实际
  • 不偏题
  • 适当发展文笔

 

CAS#9

International Women’s day

Why is equality such an important issue?

-Gender equality has always been a problem. Although it has been improved a lot, it still has not changed the thinking of some people’s gender inequality. Women and girls occupy half of the world’s population and therefore also the world’s potential
half of the force. But nowadays, gender inequality is widespread, and it can stagnate social progress. Gender equality can bring economic development, promote development, and the process of achieving gender equality is also a process of human social progress.

In terms of group nature, it is a fact that men are stronger than women because women have worse physical strength than men and are less aggressive than men. This is physiologically determined, not prejudice. Just because of a person’s gender, they will be treated unfairly, and this unfairness is more serious for women.

In terms of values, justice is our ultimate pursuit. Equal treatment is not equal to justice. If only men and women’s toilets are set in the same place, women’s toilets have to be lined up. This is not equal. In the case of equality, when men and women have the same amount of food in the famine, men are hungry, which is not fair. Equality is not justice. We can never stop at equality and give up our efforts in the direction of justice.

CAS#6

100 days in 100 words—What’s your win?

Because of the course selection, I have learned a lot of new knowledge, such as psychology and design technology which are all very interesting and very helpful for the future. Probably I would like to say I improve language skills a bit more, like the term of using appropriate grammar, use of professional terms, etc.

 

Animation reflection

This is the video I recorded for the final product we created during animation activity time, we used the tag tool app on Ipad to make an animation based on the topic- Christmas. Our aim was to design and create a background for the school music event, the main theme was Christmas so in the video, you can see Santa and snowman sort of things. In the video, the scene was after the music event, we reflected the animation on the big wall of our school main gate so that visitors and guests could see the drawing after they had a wonderful experience in the music show.

Dance showcase 2020 reflection

This year I joined the dance showcase again with 4 different dances-

  • Grease
  • Saturday night fever
  • Aladdin
  • Footloose

This year’s theme is movie, the background music and themes for all the dances are from classic movies of different eras, such as Aladdin and singing in the rain.

In the picture on the left, it is a dance movement in Grease shot by the photographer, and it is also a picture of me showing my full face in the dance showcase.