Common Assessment Task: Singapore Kindness Movement

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What have you learned YOU need to do? How might you rewrite some of your work now, in hindsight? Add some before/after to a portfolio post about analysis. Think of some DO/DON’T items you want to remember the next time you do this.

I have learned from this CAT assessment that when structuring my response, it is better to add one transitional phrase between body paragraphs to improve the cohesiveness of the essay. Additionally, when two or more elements in the text allude to the same area of argument (e.g. both the HDB setting and the hawkers’ food establish a connection to the Singaporean audience), it is better to include both evidence in the same argument instead of mentioning the two pieces separately.

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