During the Q1 of mock exams of English, I didn’t read the question properly and wrote my paragraphs from the wrong perspective. And after I have realized that I didn’t write from the right perspective, I didn’t have much time to change it which made my grade to be lower. I also did not structure my paragraphs. I didn’t have any paragraphs when I was writing my exams and some sentences did not make sense. After looking at the mark scheme, and knowing how to structure the paragraphs, I was able to write a better paragraph. Moving forward, I want to make sure I have 5 points for each of the question. And in addition, I want to make sure that my structure of the essay is in a correct format that is easy to read and understand.
One phrase I am proud of:
