Steve Dawson – #WF2018

Yesterday, my grade 9’s had the opportunity to attend a presentation by Steve Dawson, a Fox Sports anchor and sports biographer. I wasn’t quite sure what he would discuss during his presentation, and to be honest, I thought he would focus mostly on sports and athletes. Thankfully, I was wrong.

Dawson’s main focus was how to approach an interview with a potential interviewee. This may seem like something that our grade 9’s don’t have to worry about now (if ever), but as I thought about their future classes, I began to realise that what Dawson presented to them was actually a good life skill to learn.

Dawson had 5 main tips for approaching an interview, but the two that resonated with me the most are as follows:

– ask open-ended questions

– listen to the answer

As an English teacher, part of my job is to ensure that students are expressing themselves well, both in verbal and written form. If I ask a closed-ended question (e.g. “Did you enjoy reading The Handmaid’s Tale?”) then the answer could be either yes or no. If, however, I ask the same question but in an open-ended fashion (e.g. “In what ways did Offred make you consider the absence of women’s rights in Gilead?”) I will hopefully receive a more thoughtful response.

Of course, as our students answer our questions, it is also important for us to listen. We need to be mindful of what they say and acknowledge how it contributes to our discussion as a whole. No more thinking about our own to-do list … we must be present–mentally–when our students are responding to our questions.

Last night I was going through my Twitter feed before bed and I came across this blog post by Richard Branson. In it, he talks about how “positivity breeds positivity,” something that really resonated with me. I started thinking about how I can re-word my open-ended questions in order receive responses that are positive in nature. If a student writes an essay replete with errors, for example, I can either ask why s/he has made so many mistakes, or I can ask her/him how I can help to improve on their future essays. One will potentially garner a negative response, whereas the other will focus on a more positive outlook.

See the difference?

There is much value in our Writers’ Fortnight workshops. I hope our students see the value in them, too.

What does POETRY in Grade 9 look like?

Just before the October break, I introduced my Grade 9 classes to our unit on Poetry. We studied the requisite terms and looked at different forms of poetry, but I felt that something was missing. There didn’t seem to be the same type of excitement that usually surrounds our study of poetry, so I decided to mix things up a bit.

Enter Taylor Swift.

I told my class that it was #TaylorTuesday (on a Tuesday, of course) and introduced them to her song “Look What You Made Me Do.” Many of my kiddos were excited at the prospect of studying a Swift song in class rather than another poem (note: lyrics are also poetry, so I wasn’t veering too far off the curriculum). We read the lyrics, watched the video, and studied the context (I didn’t realise she had so many feuds with so many different celebrities!) My plan was working: students were annotating her lyrics to look for devices and effects. They were excited again!

An example of how one student annotated Swift’s lyrics.

We spent a long time on this. I scaffolded their learning by introducing them to commentary writing, paragraph by paragraph. I wanted them to really understand how writers (including songwriters) use various devices to create a particular effect on the reader. They created thesis strands and used the PEEEA method (Point-Evidence-Explanation-Effect-Anaylsis) to organise their commentaries. They worked collaboratively to outline and draft their ideas, then submitted them to me for feedback. I’m excited to read their interpretations of Swift’s lyrics of self-reflection. I’ll be using CheckMark (a Google Extension) in addition to my own comments to help guide them as they apply my feedback to their final drafts.

The Fast and the Furious

These #TaylorTuesday lessons (which also took place on Wednesdays) were the perfect segue to a formal piece of poetry (“Nettles” by Vernon Scannell) on which I also wanted students to practice their annotation and writing skills. The difference here is that I only gave them one class period to work on it. No, I’m not a monster; I am trying to get students used to the idea of timed-writing. In both IGCSE and IB, students will be given a limited amount of time to write certain assignments. It is therefore vital for them to get used to writing in a finite timeframe. I call this The Fast and the Furious, mainly because I love Dwayne Johnson (aka The Rock), but also because I can see my students’ brains working overtime as they quickly write down their insights and ideas.

What started out with cries of “What? One period? How??” turned into sighs of “Wow. I can’t believe I did that in one period.” I’ll be honest: I don’t think all of my students finished the entire commentary, and that’s okay. What matters is that they used the skills they’ve acquired and tried their best to complete their commentaries in a detailed and thoughtful way.

The efficiency of their writing will come … in time.