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Category: HL Essay
Reflection 2: HL Essay
After writing the mini analysis, the feedback has shown me a decrease in performance from paper 1. My main focus after receiving the second feedback is further narrowed down on analysis structure and evidence. Having a clear PEA structure will help me to strengthen my chain of analysis – in order to achieve this, I […]
Reflection 1: HL Essay
After writing the Paper 1 and receiving my numerical feedback, I thought about the two questions made by Ms Wiseman on how to improve my writing. Question 1: How might you expand your discussion to provide further insight and avoid description? -> To focus on a deeper layer of analysis I need to further explore […]