GENERAL

1 The question is important.

2 Introduce the text, have broad enough topic sentence, don’t overcomplicate.

3 Words count word counts, balance

4 Format quotations correctly, choose enough but not too much

5 Speak out of an experts mouth, not too much, and also read other relevant texts

SPECIFIC TO ME

feedback

1 Use link back to the line of inquiry so that there is a clear link throughout the writing.

3 Write more, expand on things

4 Remember to add a bibliography and engage with the quotes

Reread it out loud. Address the question.

commendations

Great secondary sources, valid points.

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