After the meeting with Mr Zobrist regarding my initial submission of EE, I now have better understanding of which section of the Essay should be empathised for further coherence. In Design technology EE, it is essential to focus on the criterion C which is the analysis and application of the researches done. As I had a lot of statistics and data in the paper, it was more of a report rather than EE; therefore, I will be focusing more on the critical analysis which in this context is the application of the use of green paper tubes as a structure of paper shelter. Through discussion, I realised that I had missed some specific DT terminologies which could be used in the essay. Key terms such as “Eco design”, “Life Cycle Analysis” and “Properties of Material” will be added to the research section to further demonstrate my knowledge on the concepts learned inside the class.
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