Tuesday, 23rd February 2021 My personal targets are: to improve my body paragraphs I will refer to more techniques correctly and more often The introduction must have a brief overview of what happens, it must acknowledge the form, and have a thesis that is linked to the formal feature. Body Paragraphs should have transitional topic […]
ELP – Compilation of Goals for Paper 1
Wednesday 17th February 2020 Goals: I need to write more in the time frame, often don’t get to a conclusion. Time Management! I need to unpack my ideas in more detail, unpack the quotes in more detail Things to remember: Conceptualising – thesis, topic sentence, bigger ideas, the writer explores….., shows understanding about what […]
ELP – Paper 1 Practice Reflection
Tuesday, 26th January 2021 We wrote a paper one last week, I wrote mine on ‘Eat Me’ by Patience Agbabi. I quite liked this poem and had a lot of ideas surrounding it. I waffled on about the ideas for a while, so the structure of my essay was not great, as well as an […]
LO3 – Initiative – Equality
*I said LO5 but I was actually talking about LO3
Paper 1 Reflect/Notes/Ideas – ELP
Wednesday 20/01/2020 Paper 1 Notes We looked at “The Banished Gods” by Derek Mahon. Where nature is personified and prompts the readers to feel remorse or regret towards modern life. I started writing a paper 1 introduction 3 times because I was not happy with how my ideas sounded on the paper, as well as […]
Project Week Reflection
Thursday, 3rd December 2020 Project Week Reflection Project week was a trip that my friends and I were planning to go on as part of the IB CAS curriculum. We had planned to go to rafting in Nepal. The planning process was a bit complicated, we had a few challenges as a group with working […]