I think in this Paper 1, the main thing I realised was that I forgot to mention some aspects that only apply to plays like the people on stage and off stage. Though I did me
ntion the husbands at the ending of my analysis, it would have been nice if I could have explored this further.
This is a picture of a paragraph that I edited after receiving feedback. The main things I focused on was making sure my sentences were clear and developing a clear topic sentence.