HL english essay personal feedback

  1. let the experts speak for you (throughout)
  2. follow up questions- with agreement or challenge

you analysis of the text is excellent and you have a thoughtful meaningful line of inquiry

  • use shorter specific quotations
  • shorter word count
  • let the experts say “according to…”
  • when making points lead back to the question and follow them up with an analysis
  • if u say smth like a point of this thing symbolic for somthing find quotation

need to work in my quotes better into my essay and link them to my point better and not just make up stuff for stuffs sake, if it doesnt make sense to include dont include it

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