I have collected primary data from interviews and surveys from locals for information to support my research. After reflecting on these questions asked in the interviews and surveys, I have realised that it was difficult for me to consider which questions should be included in the essay and if it would be relevant to research. some questions that were asked in the interview with a local business may not have been totally relevant but could still be part of the research if assumptions that it improved the standard of living of the employees were made. moreover, my supervisor has also advised me to analyse my work more thoroughly and constantly link it back to the research question to avoid writing irrelevant information. The data that I collect should always be linked back to support answering the main research question, which should be done more analytically than descriptively which i still have to work on.