I would improve in the organization of my ideas and arguments by first finalizing my thesis which contains my 3 main points that relate to my central theme. For the body, I would introduce each of the 3 main points and add evidence directly from the text in order to support my argument. I would comment more on the way language was used by each character and how it affected the circumstances and dynamics of the play, and each character’s role in the events that came to be. For every main argument I introduced, I must always relate it to my main topic. In the conclusion, I must take all of my ideas and arguments and how it all supports the main topic.