Practical Changes

-Begin with a Topic Sentence

-Stick to present tense when writing about literature

-Unpacking Details

Changes Regarding to the Essay

-Brabantio’s Response to Iago and Roderigo’s cries must be unpacked

 

A- Knowledge + understanding 3/5

B- Craft/Style/ Language 3/5

C- Organization 3/5

D – Language 4