I have not gotten my feedback yet, but from reading the comments then I do not feel it went very well.. I am unsure if I am doing it very wrong or how significant these mistakes are.. Despite my insecurities, I felt rather proud of my first essay whilst writing it...
These are my current goals 🙂 For the upcoming mock I aim to: be more specific in my writing link more to conceptual ideas (this also connects to having a more clear thesis/overall argument) have an overall argument (thesis) and then build on/elaborate on that...
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Project Week – Video reflection 2 (Link)
