TOK Practice Essay- Reflection- Feb 2021

I think currently, my recent essay would score at 7 out of 10. I think this is because I was able to evaluate some different points of view, and was able to support my arguments with appropriate examples. However, I think I wasn’t always able to retain a clear focus on the essay question throughout the essay, and in some places, my arguments weren’t very clear. I think this would be the main thing to focus on next time I write an essay.