After having a conversation about my EE with my supervisor, I have come to understand more about what an EE may contain. I able to contai right content as I was able to explain the correct mechanisms and had the right research papers to support my evidence. However, I realised that my structure was wrong and my essay didn’t have a strong enough flow. Though my data and research prove the trend predicted and hypothesized, I realized that it is important for me to become more organised in writing and structuring my essay. Furthermore, I saw that communication in background information lacked depth as my mechanisms showed short/unclear explanations. This shows that communication was an area of improvement.