The following are two things about my essay writing that I am proud of:
- Embedding of quotes
- Mentioning Ibsen’s name multiple times in each paragraph
Through practice, I’ve learned that I’m really good at embedding quotes because I’ve demonstrated that I can change them slightly to fit into the sentence that I am writing. However, I know I need to work on adding more analysis to my body paragraphs for each piece of evidence that I use. I plan to do this by asking myself “so what?” each time I think that I have finished writing about a piece of evidence. This should help me think in more detail and depth about what I am writing about and therefore, allow me to write a more in-depth analysis.
Hi Anna,
Yes, I think that’s a good idea. Another suggestion is to write “so what?” at the top of your planning doc so that you will constantly see it as you write. It will work like a reminder for you.
Good luck!
Mrs. Ashton