Feedback

“You identified the main idea which is promoted in the text here at the start – and you sometimes came back to this, but it wasn’t always sustained. The focus has got to be present in every paragraph!

You identify some of the features really well – but in the last 2 paragraphs, your writing is more descriptive than analytical.”

Next steps

• When highlighting the evidence, make sure to annotate the effects of it alongside with it first
• Make sure focus is referred to – link analysis back to it every time!