Criterion A: 6
Looking back at the recording, I think I was generally able to extract different ideas, express them logically and in relevance to the thesis I had stated in the beginning. However, as I have noticed even before the IO, my ideas are essentially more related to the global issue of identity and culture rather than art. A lot of my ideas are linked with Hoch representation of female identity and how she challenges society of the concept of binary gender stereotypes and in that sense, not so much of art. However again, I guess the point is that this is all communicated through the means of art, which I guess I kind of emphasized towards the end, but not really.
Criterion B: 5
Like I have stated before, most of my ideas are essentially linked more with identity and culture, thus I feel like I deserve fewer marks on this. That being said, in relation to identity and culture global issue, I think I extracted relevant information and represented logical analysis of the choices Hoch made to present her ideas. Again, lots of regrets, in the sense that I didn’t really get to say all of the ideas I wanted to say given time pressure and as well as the lack of rehearsal. Nonetheless, I thought my analysis was quite alright and perhaps insightful at times.
Criterion C: 6
For this section, I don’t really have much to say other than the fact that I think I structured my ideas logically and kept the focus on the task. I was also building onto my ideas, connecting the micro-analyses I made to one another to create macro ideas. However, at times, I think I repeated quite often and in that aspect, I can work on reducing the time spent on the same ideas and instead work on adding in more unique/insightful ideas.
Criterion D: 6
I think I was able to keep the acceptable/formal language through the practice IO and I also don’t really think I used wrong vocabulary. I also think I was able to use more technical terms that I normally use to help build my analysis( though I also felt like my vocabulary may have been repetitive ).
Total Marks: 23