In terms of criterion A, I think I was able to analyse most elements of the text chosen to a detailed degree. I was also able to draw connections between these different elements and therefore show development of my ideas or their changing effect as a stand-alone sentence compared to the larger paragraph. At the same time, I don’t think I contextualised the text or elements of the text to the entire body of work, the main portion of my points was an analysis of the text related to the global issue. Even so, I also found it quite difficult to specifically address the entirety of my zoomed-in global issued (I focused more on the exploitation of the working class and corruptive practices of the wealthy, but didn’t really connect it to the context of the American Dream throughout the entire oral).
Related to criterion D, I also could have used a range of more precise and varied vocabulary. There were parts where I found it difficult to communicate clearly and phrase my ideas quickly based on looking at my bullet points. I also realised that I said ‘um’ a lot of times, which although doesn’t directly hinder the communication of my ideas just becomes an unnecessary filler and can be quite annoying to listen to. Hopefully, this can be improved through including specific and relevant terminology in my bullet points and more speaking practice using basic sentence structures like “The effect/significance of …”, “This suggests/implies…”
Grade: 7-8