Reflecting on the 4000-word submission, I am satisfied with the work I did since I developed my understanding of the Japanese constitution and its implication. I think all the secondary research provided me sufficient insights to establish my own argument with credible supporting historiographies. From the feedback, I realised that I need to change the headings into demilitarisation, civil rights and democracy to clearly portray political and socio-economic impact. Furthermore, I decided to combine the section indicating the degradation of the emperor’s status with that of civil rights and democracy. This way, I believe the structure will indicate impacts of the Constitution and answer the research question better. To effectively implement the changes, I will reorganize the essay and make sure to explicitly state the impact by consolidating the arguments with reliable historiographies. However, I must evaluate each historiography’s values and limitations to avoid bias.
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