GATSBY – Chapter 4 notes

Chapter 4 presents the contradiction between the perfection of the parties and the corruption of the city – that made the money possible. At the end of chapter 4, Nick realizes he is just being used by Gatsby to get Daisy.

What are the details of Gatsby’s constructed past?

  • “My family all died and I came into a good deal of money”
    • Idea of heritage – maybe Gatsby made this up to cover up his illegal doings
  • “I lived like a young raja in all the capitals of Europe”
  • “I tried very hard to die, but seemed to bear an enchanted life”
  • “Educated in Oxford”

All elements that present his prestigious and seemingly fictitious lifestyle  

What role does Wolfsheim play in this chapter?

  • The grubby capitalist
  • His primary goal is to make money 
  • Nasty, dangerous, corrupting
  • Taints other characters

What is the significance of the cars that pass Nick and Gatsby as they cross the bridge?

  • Contradiction between the perfection of the parties and the corruption of the city?
  • “Anything can happen now that we’ve slif over this bridge”

What parallels does McRae see between Gatsby and the character of Kurtz in The Heart of Darkness?

  • Both mysterious characters
    • Rumours
    • Introduced late in story
  • Both presented as a symbol 
    • Gatsby of new America
    • Kurtz of Europeans in Africa
  • Hollowness deep down
    • Illusion of happiness in Gatsby
  • Societal Implications
    • The arrogance of money in Gatsby (spoilt rich people)
    • The depredation of Europeans in Africa (slavery)
  • Historical representations
    • History of America’s newfound wealth
    • History of European colonization and its evil effects
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Ultimate Frisbee #1

LO2- Demonstrate that challenges have been undertaken, developing new skills in the process.

In the third term of this year, I signed up for ultimate frisbee after school as I enjoyed playing the sport in PE. I recognize that I am not a very athletic person and sometimes feel pressured in competitive scenarios, there were several times while playing games where I would miss the catch and feel disappointed in myself afterward. Not just cause my teammates were annoyed but also cause I feel sports are more fun the better you get. Therefore, I used the disappointment to work harder and develop my catching and throwing skills. During warmups where we would partner up, I’d try out different kinds of throwing techniques such as forehand, backhand, overhead, and this helped me identify my tendencies of tilting the frisbee while releasing it instead of letting it openly fly. So I made sure I stopped doing that which was very helpful and I saw instant improvement during games. As for catching, I actually found it very easy during warm-ups but as soon as we were put in a game I would constantly mess up easy catches. I tried analyzing why but nothing worked, so I asked one of my teammates for advice and he told me to just don’t think. The next time the frisbee was heading my way I didn’t hesitate at all and as a result, caught it with ease. It was almost unbelievable how seamless the process felt. Looking back, I realize this is a skill I need to practice in all kinds of situations – outside of sport as well. I notice that I overthink a lot before making any decisions, which is very draining and honestly not even that helpful. I am going to make a conscious effort to stop this bad habit in sports as well as in life.

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MINDS Tampines #3

LO7-Recognise and consider the ethical implications of choices and actions.

In season 3 of this service, we were finally able to visit the MINDS Tampines Center in groups of 3 each and meet our clients in person. Up till this point, we had been doing everything through technology where I felt there was no proper connection. Stepping into the center for the first time was definitely an interesting experience for me, I have had a lack of experience communicating with intellectually disabled individuals so being in an open environment with them was a bit uncomfortable at first. However, I was conscious of how I expressed myself as I understand my posture and words can cause a negative stigma on issues that I do not want to contribute towards. I pushed myself out of my comfort zone and looking back, I can see that over time my confidence slowly built up and I was more able to engage with them in the drawing and dancing activities.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

There was an instance where one of the participants grabbed onto my arm and started squeezing it. I wasn’t really sure what to do, I get that he may have just been excited from the music and dancing but at the moment I felt slightly threatened. I was put in a situation where I had to carefully consider my ethical decisions to prevent anything bad from happening. I focused on remaining my composure and requesting one of the trained attendants for assistance. The situation was quickly solved and I am glad that nobody got hurt.

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Jakarta Street Kids #3

LO5-Demonstrate the skills and recognize the benefits of working collaboratively

Season 3 of this GC was quite eventful. Usually, the revenue generated from the market week by the Grade 10 Enterprise students is donated to charity, however, this year (due to setbacks from COVID-19) we were presented with the opportunity to make a short video explaining why our GC could use the money – for the grade 10 students to vote to give all of the revenue from the market week too.  I worked closely with the chair and organizer of the service, I had the important role of producing the video (filming, editing, etc.) I gave my ideas for the script of the video to make it authentic and sincere as I feel that would be the most effective in convincing the grade 10 students. It was important that we won the votes as our GC was at risk of shutting down from not generating any money the past year. It was difficult implementing all of our different ideas in the video, as some people had a different vision of the project than I did. I noticed that I was quite stubborn when it came to new ideas, probably because I was used to how  I intended it to look and felt uncomfortable with different approaches. I need to work on this and stop being so fixated on my vision in case I make more videos in the future. Eventually, I learned to consider everybody’s ideas which in the end made a more creative and intelligent video. Editing was a very tedious and time-consuming process, yet I felt it was the most important part to make sure the grade 10 students don’t feel bored and remain engaged throughout. I feel as though I could have been a better team player by getting my edits peer-reviewed as a lot of the big decisions I made in the edit didn’t have a chance to be discussed due to the deadline of the submission.  It was overall a great learning experience, and in the end, we managed to earn $5000 for the service. I am honestly quite proud of myself, but more than that, proud of my team members who were an essential part of the process. Here is the video below

 

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Historical Significance of Gatsby

 

 

 

Chapter 1 sets the scene about West Egg, East Egg, but as well as Nick Carraway’s past – his ambitions, his self image

What is the meaning of the novel’s epigraph?

  •  It’s about what a man will do to win the love of the woman he desires
    • So much of the novel is about Gatsby just trying to get Daisy back (e.g flexing luxury) but we learn that money can’t buy love
    • A novel that questions morals of the time

What are some of the features of the novel outlined in this lecture (focus especially on contradiction)?

  • Nick Carraway is introduced as a lucky, or advantaged, character. Yet when he travels to West Egg, we can see how much of a disadvantage he has (to people like Gatsby) due to his wealthiness.
  • The contradiction between West and East Coast. East Coast represents the golden jeunesse doree, superior compared to the hicks over at Midwest. 
  • The ‘ashes wasteland’ in contradiction to the wealth, beauty and lavishness of the Gatsby lifestyle
  • Narrative Contradiction: The way Nick narrates representing the contradictions in morality. He does it unconsciously as well.
    • “I had a dog – at least I had him for a few days until he ran away”
    • Misogynistic values – He’s never properly praised a woman “and an Old Doge and a Finnish Woman” suggests the car is more important than the woman. 
    • The yellow car that killed Myrtle was way more important than Myrtle
    • Within 3 lines he changes from being lonely to not lonely “I was lonely no longer”

What are some of the concepts/themes explored in the novel? What significance, in particular, does the historical background of modern America have in the book?

  • Money can’t buy love
  • Questions of modern morality
    • Irreligious society that believes in wealth and aspiration
  • Racism/White supremacy
  • The 1920’s gave birth to the age of people wanting to get famous purely for being famous and not actually contributing to society in a meaningful way
    • Hollowness of Jazz Age
  • Significance of the word ‘Golden’ throughout the novel: representing an abstract dream or goal, something intangible.
    • Relates with how the plot feels intangible as not that much happens
    • Point is that nothing is very explicit or clear in the novel (e.g don’t know who killed Myrtle)
    • Looking at the green light: it’s an unreachable dream (contradiction)
  • Key Idea What this novel is about? Question of the hero: Nick Carraway admires Gatsby for his wealth, attractiveness, mysteriousness etc.
    • The reader would also like to be Gatsby even though they know the success is hollow

Link with historical background?

  • Concept of ‘freedom’ and ‘American Identity’ stems from the colonisers (the Puritans, the Pilgrim fathers etc.). They went to America to find freedom and establish a nation.
  • American superiority complex underlies the full novel

What is meant by Nick being “An Unreliable Narrator”? Give examples.

  • Nick Carraway is shown to be a vulnerable character with moral values in the opening of the book. Therefore, he is going to think the best of everyone and not criticise them
  • The way Nick Carraway narrates this novel is almost through contradiction (e.g questioning moral superiority from the first three lines)
    • For example, Tom being racist  
  • All throughout the novel Nick just cares about his reputation and looking good – which leads him to making misjudgements (e.g letting Gatsby off the hook).
    • Nick struggles with managing in this hectic society in contrast to his dominance in page one
  • Key idea: Nick Carraway is the insecure narrator. He doesn’t tell lies. He is unreliable because he is not sure what he is seeing, where he is at, what he is talking about, what the overall motivation of why he moves to New York and moves back. 
    • He can’t reconcile the wealth gaps. He can’t reconcile his own moral standpoint or immoral behavior of the people around him.
    • His insecurity permeates through the novel therefore nothing is certain in the story as it’s from Nick’s perspective
    • Undermines his self image by the way he talks about his aspirations and other people
  • The way he narrates: He gives a fact and then takes it away. “I had a dog – at least I had him for a few days until he ran away”
    • This happens until the final page where all the ultimate contradictions come together (Assertion and denial)

 

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Paper 1 English Exam Review

1: I did not annotate the text very well

This resulted in me not having a lot of stylistic/authorial choices for me to analyze and evaluate

2: I did not have a big idea to argue across my full essay

This resulted in an overall worse essay. I understood it was directed at middle-class male consumers, but what I could have done is make a link between Chevrolet to a sense of American Identity.

3. My organization was all over the place

This resulted in very large paragraphs with no distinct topics that distinguish each of them. Furthermore, I didn’t really follow the PEE structure and I just kind of wrote down all the ideas I had as they came to my head, making it more tedious for the examiner to realize what’s going on.

What will I do?

I need to practice all aspects of the paper one essay in general. (Criterion A-D) These could be things like revising more literary devices, etc. to improve my Language, practicing the PEE structure, and also just being able to annotate the text thoroughly in order to pick up all the different stylistic choices for me to analyze, evaluate, and build an overall argument from. Another thing I am going to do is work on making the essay enjoyable to read for the examiner, as this would likely increase my chances of getting higher marks.

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EE Reflection 1

I initially opted for World Studies between Film and business with the idea of exploring the evolution of the Film industry from an art form to a thriving market. However, upon discussing with my supervisor this idea showed to be very vague and I realized I was not very passionate about it.

While brainstorming ideas, I took a step back and thought about my favorite films, specifically the characters. I decided to change to a film EE and focus on the representation of mental disability. I feel this is a very significant issue that has developed strong cultural implications and is something I connect strongly with. My strategy is to compare and contrast two distinct films that feature disabled characters, looking at the themes, creative choices, story, etc. and evaluate the societal impact they had.

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Thetis Overeview Paragraph

In what ways can Thetis be understood as a poem about transformation and power?

Thetis by Carol Ann Duffy uses the context of the Greek goddess Thetis who transforms into different forms in an attempt to escape from Peleus to tell a story of the vulnerability of women at the hands of men, and their ability to adapt and survive as they grow into womanhood. Throughout the poem, we hear the perspective of Thetis as she shapeshifts into different animals, creatures, and even elements, doing different things and struggling more and more to escape, but every single time the pursuer shapeshifts into the one thing that is able to capture her. This could show that nobody is able to fully change themselves as they will always have the same weaknesses that they can never get rid of. The elusive ending of the poem illustrates her eventually succumbing to the hunter and giving birth to a child. Duffy could be making a statement on her attitudes towards the purpose of a female which is to create life, or how women will always be controlled by stronger men and have no choice but to accept it in order to free themselves.

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Ultimate Frisbee #2

LO4-Show commitment and perseverance in CAS experiences. 

Season 3 of Ultimate Frisbee was both rewarding and challenging.  Several factors affected my commitment levels, one of the main ones being the time aspect. Our class started at 4:30 pm every Wednesday, lasting until 6 pm. Therefore, by the time I got home from the 6:15 pm Orchard school bus, it was already around 7 pm. Plus another 30 minutes approx to walk back home to my condo, once I finally arrived, showered, ate, I would have been exhausted and it would have been too late to do any school work. This disincentivized me to continue attending classes, especially during this period of extensive school work and our Grade 11 mock exams coming up. However, I decided to not let this stop me. Our school ended at 3 pm, therefore that gave me 1.5 hours to do a solid amount of work before our class started. In fact, I found that during this time period, I was even more productive. I wasn’t sure why, perhaps it was because of the school environment that motivated me, but whatever it is I am glad that I made most of this time I had. This allowed me to get most of my homework done for the day, so after the class when I finally arrived home, I did not feel even more stressed out to rush and get work done, and I still managed to get 7+ hours of essential sleep.

Another factor that kind of demotivated me, although to a lesser extent, occurred towards the end of the season when I felt things started to get really repetitive, which felt a little boring. Therefore, for the last few lessons, I suggested to our coach to switch up our regular games and try out something new like a tournament to increase the stakes and make it more fun. This helped spark the light back in me to feel motivated and persevere in this CAS experience.

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#TalkAboutBias Overview

In what ways do the films in the #TalkAboutBias campaign challenge racial bias in contemporary America?

The two films “The Talk” and “The Look” in the #TalkAboutBias campaign by Protector and Gamble present two different narratives that interrogate our cultural attitudes towards racial inequality. Emotional soundtracks, intimate camera shots, and powerful dialogue all help to create an emotional understanding of racial inequality which motivates the audience to sympathise with these characters  on a deeper level. The events in the stories take place throughout different settings and time periods, echoing events in modern society and presenting the evolution of these ideas throughout the decades. The producers express many manifestations/forms of bias in these advertisements which is ultimately an appeal to the audience. The films become a provocation, a conversation for the viewers and the rest of society to get involved and understand how we have gotten to this point and question how these issues of racial prejudice are displayed today. The use of the hashtag in the phrase #TalkAboutBIas resemble a call for change in societal values, an attempt to spark a light to achieve true equality in future generations.

The Talk

This short film presents a series of montages, showing conversations between black mothers and their children, essentially warning or preparing them for the real world and making sure they stay safe. It jumps through different time periods starting from the 1930s all the way to the present, referencing how examples of racial prejudice and the unnecessary anxiety black mothers experience for their children have evolved yet remained consistent throughout the decades. The film has a strong emphasis on the perspective of the mothers through the use of mise-en-scène which gives the audience a more emotional and intimate understanding of the impacts of racial inequality. Furthermore, the use of sound design paint this picture of a harsh and brutal society that black children have always had to grow up and face, complemented by the melancholic soundtrack that in the end becomes hopeful to motivate the audience to start talking about the talk and build a brighter future.

The Look

This short film follows a middle-aged black man in society as he goes about his daily life experiencing different manifestations of implicit and explicit bias. It acts as a reflection of modern society but as well as an echo of racial injustice. The producers of the film greatly utilized the POV shot in order to immerse the audience in the black protagonist’s perspective. This inflicts a feeling of rejection into the viewer as they are experiencing racial bias first hand which creates an overall more impactful message. This is complemented through the use of diegetic audio which reinforces the reality of the situations as well as the reflective mood of the soundtrack that causes the audience to carefully consider their decisions.

Notes:

Ideas & Concepts

What narrative is established in the advert? A middle aged black man goes about his daily routine, but we see many people give him a sort of disgusted look due to his skin colour  
Describe the setting and context of the advertisement. (Temporal/Cultural/Geographical/ Social/Historical) -Modern day

-City

-Perspective of a black man 

What themes are established? -Racial prejudice

-Oppression

What cultural values or attitudes are evident? -Black people are different

-The general population do not feel comfortable or safe living their lives with black civilians

Stylistic Features & Elements of Composition

Describe the mood/atmosphere. How is this created/established? Does it change? -Reflective mood: kind of presenting this idea and the soundtrack helps the audience sympathize with him

-Harsh atmosphere: through the facial expressions and actions of the actors the world feels really cruel and we get this sense of rejection.

The feeling completely changes with the last scene where we found out he is a respected judge and it kind of makes the audience realise that we shouldn’t assume negative things about people at first glance

Characterisation: who is in the advert? What role(s) do they play? How do they relate to one another? How is language (visual/verbal) used to reinforce certain ideas or attitudes? -Middle aged black man: plays role of a normal black man in today’s society who works like everyone else but with the added struggles of being black

-Strangers: plays role of the white population that judge and reject black people 

Visual language of the strangers face 

Diegetic audio in shopping scene to reinforce the reality of the situation

What does the camera focus on? What can you say about shots, camera angles and their effect or impact? What can you say about the proximity of the audience? Camera focuses on strangers’ facial expressions and the black person’s reaction to them. Mainly medium and closeups to emphasise emotion. Several POV shots that immerse ourselves in the black man’s perspective to reinforce the strangers attitudes – makes us understand how black people feel. The audience are at a comfortable distance away from the characters, so we can see them in the environment surrounding showing how they are a part of our everyday lives.
Sound elements: how do they work with the narrative elements? What effect do they have? Dramatic sound effect of the lift door shutting – rejection

Piano soundtrack – feeling of reflectivity and inspiration

Where does the product (if there is one) or brand sit in relation to the above? Shows how they consider how they treat people – Stand up for minorities – serves for justice
What audience is the advertisement aimed at? How do you know? Aimed at everyone through the final message “Let’s all talk about the the look”

The Look 

https://us.pg.com/talkaboutbias/

Chapter 1: Unconscious Bias

“Unsupported judgement against a certain group of people”

Purpose: Not to shame or blame, but spark a dialogue of how it is to be a black 

Chapter 2: Education

1957, Little Rock, Arkansas

Angry protestors threw rocks and gave death threats to nine new african american students that registered to an all white high school in Little Rock Central

Now, public schools

Educational Divide: African American students still half less access to study resources and good quality education

Chapter 3: Dining

1960, Greensboro, North Carolina

Four college freshmen were not allowed at F.W Woolworth department store as they were black. ‘Lunch counter discrimniation’.

2018, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

Two black men arrested in Starbucks for sitting at the table without purchasing anything

Chapter 4: Shut out

1921, Tulsa, Oklahoma

Whites in the area firebombed a thriving African American neighborhood killing 250+ of them.  

2019

Limitations:African Americans face inequality e.g have less chance of getting loans or owning houses

Chapter 5: Pools

1964, St.Augustine, Florida

White hotel owner pours hydrochloric acid in a pool of black swimmers

2015, Mckinney, Texas

Excessive Force: White officer physically abused 15 year old black kid at party 

Chapter 6: Shopping

1900s, The American South

Jim Crow Era: whites were always serves first, oddly presenting black people in advertisements, constant pressure on black people

2018, Los Angeles, California

Label of “Serena” on African American shoppers, speculation on non famous/rich black customers

Chapter 7: Justice

1935, College Park, Maryland

Amherst University graduate Donald Gaines Murray rejected from University of Maryland Law School from being black

Now

Lack of faith in justice system, lacking representation of African American judges (12%)

Exploring The Look

What does the narrative portray the protagonist as doing in his daily life?

This narrative follows a regular middle aged black man as he goes about his daily life running errands. It acts as a reflection of modern society but as well as an echo of racial injustice. There is also a strong theme of father son relationships throughout the story.

What forms of explicit and implicit bias does he encounter?

  • Explicit bias:
    • Strangers not holding the lift door for him
    • Boyfriend kind of ‘protecting’ girlfriend from him
    • Mom shutting car windows 
  • Implicit bias
    • Facial expressions ‘the look’
    • Quick glances/stares

How does he respond to these encounters?

  • Confused
  • Hurt/sad/excluded
  • Angry

He does not respond or talk back to them, he kind of accepts it just giving a slight frustrated look back 

How does the structure of the narrative (camera shots, music, editing) contribute to the audience understanding of “The perspective of the protagonist offers us a glimpse into a world that many may not have to experience on a daily basis”

  • POV shots with diegetic audio immerse ourselves in the black man’s perspective to reinforce the strangers attitudes – makes us understand how black people feel – personal element/empathy
  • Emotional soundtrack: Reflective mood kind of presenting this idea and the piano helps the audience sympathise with him
  • Harsh atmosphere: through the facial expressions and actions of the actors the world feels really cruel and we get this sense of rejection
  • No dialogue shows lack of conversation about this subject

Class Discussion:

A day in the life narrative structure – representation of what is typical/normalised

  • Leads to wider themes/issues

The ad focuses on what is unsaid (Tacit) and the paralanguage (Facial expressions/body language)

Cosmopolitan Setting – America

Mother rolls up window scene:

Children represent the effects of socialization – expressed idea that racism is taught – contrast setup against adults 

Dominant discourse – Mother sees a threat – Racial profiling

Key Idea of the Perception of others – the way we see things

People in the lift

The protagonist acknowledges the look and is not oblivious to it in every scene

Diner:

White couple didn’t want to sit near him – repulsion/protection 

Young teenagers – ownership of space

The narratives we consume leads us to judge / make biased assumptions

This film is about questioning dominant narratives in US society  tv/film/radio/advertising/social media

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