I found it interesting how he was so successful and he dropped out of school. He runs 2 businesses that are in over 25 countries. It shows how sometimes school isn’t the always the best thing and geniuses like Steve Jobs, Bill Gates and Mark Zuckerberg dropped out of college or school. Also he broke the whole process of writing a book into a formula and simplified it so much yet it made sense, yet the book isn’t wouldn’t be boring as we know the formula.
I think you need to revisit this reflection and look at it in more depth. Spend more time on it and apply one of the protocols to avoid merely writing a statement of what happened.
This pushes me to wonder if it is a coincidence that a lot of the successful people have dropped out of school, it was great how you included examples. However, you should give more context of how the formula worked out as the reader wouldn’t quite understand that well if they weren’t there at the session. Overall, I think this reflection would do better with more depth and thinking.