Planning For The HL English Essay

Text We Looked At:

  • Atonement
  • The Importance of Being Earnest
  • The Visit
  • The Worlds Wife
  • Home Fire
  • Antigone
  • Fun Home

 

Text Preference:

  • Atonement
  • The Importance of Being Earnest

 

Ideas For Line Of Inquiry:

  • Atonement:
    • Criminal Narrative:
      • The Villain – Paul Marshall:
        • McEwan seems to marginalise Paul’s criminality – not pursued or punished
      • The Victims:
        • Lola:
          • Lola is sidelined as a victim – Briony makes story about herself
          • Before the assault, Lola was a victim of her parents divorce
          • After the rape ….
        • Robbie:
          • Already victim of class distinctions – Emily Tallis doesn’t forgive him for getting a first from Cambridge
          • Falsely accused of crime he didn’t commit
        • Briony:
          • Victim of her emerging sexuality, inadequate parenting, biology, class and over imagination
        • Cecilia
          • Another victim of social obligation to her sister
          • Becomes an outcast because of her education
  • The Importance Of Being Earnest:

NIDA Voice Lessons – Day 3

Breathing Co-ordination

Alexandar ____ techniques

  • Getting body back into natural alignment
  • 1 technique: semi-supine position
    • get a book, lie on back, feet flat on floor, arms in t-shape
    • Breath, let gravity pull you down
    • Body will realign it’s self
      • Called constructive rest
  • Silent la la la
    • Coordinates the breath (slows it down)
    • Push against wall while speaking lines – keeps you grounded and energised

Feedback:

  • Do omnish (paints a picture)
  • Pushing against the wall (make endings more sharp)
  • Stop gloating
  • Don’t rest things for the sake of reciting them, give a perspective

 

NIDAOnline: NIDA Audition Preparation – Classical Monologues (Day 2)

  • you feel the words on the page and make them yours
    • Make your monologue true to you, make it sensor – make it more believable
  • When speaking a classical monologue, don’t speak in rhythm, try and speak normally.
  • Impatient of not hearing back from a text she sent
  • Fidgety
  • Frustrated
  • Angry
  • Upset at protese?
  • Happy letter was from protease

Feedback:

  • Go deeper into text
  • Find a person who who love not form you family – put face to nurse
    • Love her
    • Being mean to her
    • Know who the nurse is
    • Someone who is an older woman who you trust
  • can be a little skitzo – 14 year olds are a little skitzo when talking about love
  • Have to know how hot Romeo is – find that person in your life
    • Know how exciting that is

Challenge:

  • Understanding what’s happening

Success:

  • Get out of the rhythm

NIDA Online: The Creative Voice – Day 2

Focusing on the musicality the voice

Gurning:

  • Art of making silly faces

Omnish

  • More gurning will change the way you sound

Exercise:

  • Speak lines normally
  • Speak lines in Omnish
  • Speak lines normally again
  • Notice the differences

Reflection

  • Difficulties in speaking Omnish while speaking your lines (the same intention)
  • Change in pitch and pace
  • More animated in voice and facial expression
  • Difference between first and 3rd read
  • More emotion
  • Gives us more, range, color , texture
    • Sounds we’re not used to making these sounds
    • More range, color and texture we have make us sound more interesting
      • Breaks the usual rhythms we get stuck in

ABAB:

  • Get an idea of character playing though different tactics (e.g.: energise, fear, ..)
  • Get story/understanding of character
    • Commit to the words and actions creates the allusion of character
  • Pitch changes
  • vouls shift
  • Vocal energy can shift
  • Texture
  • change in speed and delivery
  • Break habit, change tactics
    • More variety and options
  • Hard with short word/phrase – can’t explore tactic much
  • Adding nuance to the word
    • Creates more depth to the story
  • Brings intention.
  • What do you want form the audience?

NIDAOnline: NIDA Audition Preparation – Classical Monologues

  • Zoom Call
  • 4 sessions.

 

Job of an actor:

  • Articulation/be heard
  • Remain in character
  • Remember lines
  • Remember que’s
  • Knowing what and when to say
  • Being heard
  • how much energy you should bring to the stage
    • Must bring freshness when repeating the scene
  • Keep your breath
  • Reality and truth of humanity
    • How do you use your props as if you use them every day (e.g.: smoking, using your whole body)
      • can use rosemary Tabasco instead of actually smoking
  • Must have self care
  • Must find own way to get into scene (e.g.: playing a drunk when you’ve never been drunk)
  • Have to do all of this and make it look effort less

Given Circumstances:

  • who
  • What
  • When
  • Where
  • why

The actor as detective

  • Must read the text to get the given circumstances
  • Must understand what is happening in the scene and why they said what they said
  • At teh given time
  • Don’t think of it as a speech, but as a series of thought
    • The character doesn’t have speech planed out,

Objective:

  • I want
  • I need
  • I must have

Choose the strongest

Raise the stakes

How do I get it? – action

  • As long as you can physically do it, that’s what gives it the “action”
  • What’s in the way of achieving your objective? – gives you drama.
  • Don’t want perfection/polished actor when auditioning
  • Looking for actor who they can work with (actor will bring something the producers like)
  • want to see your version of the character
  • What motivates your character – what makes them human?
    • Take them off the classical/heightened language pedestal and make them human
      • there’s sometimes a tendency to put on an actor voice – don’t
      • Want to hear your voice
        • Want clarity of utterance (speak clearly)
        • Pace
        • Ease
        • All things that are far easier said than done

Homework: Study play:

Questions:

  • Who are you? – Juliet
  • Age? – 13
  • Gender? – Female
  • Race? – Italian
  • Professions?
  • Social status?
  • Family? – daughter of the patriarch of the House of Capulet
  • Relationships? – Romeo – love interest
  • Education?
  • Wealth? – wealthy family

For your speech specifically:

  • Where are you? – Capulet’s Orchard
    • geographical – Verona, Italy
    • Environmental – garden
    • Time of day
    • Season
  • Where have been
  • Where are you coming from
  • Where are you going
  • What do you want? – to meet with Romeo
  • What is fact
  • What can you speculate/assume

NIDA Online: The Creative Voice – Day 1

  • Zoom Call
  • Did some imagery breathing techniques
  • To free the voice, we need to free the breath
  • Want to be honest when we use our voice
  • Born with amazing body
  • Over time with conditioning, things go wrong:
    • Can you please be quiet
    • All these muscular conditioning affects our vocal conditioning
  • Excess muscular traction can hinder our communication despite feeling great
  • Releasing tension
  • Freeing the breath
  • Allows expression and undoes the conditioning
  • Breathing impulse is primary impulse
  • Breath connected to voice – communicates better
  • Freedom within the body will allow freedom within teh breath and vice versa

How Am I Going To Make Grade 12 A Successful, Fulfilling Experience For Me?

Next year, I plan to organise my time better so I can meet deadlines and and still have time to socialise with family and friends. I am also going to attend University workshops held in/out of school, and do more research and preparation into which Uni I want to attend. I want to audition for the High School play next year so I can gain more experience in the making of a production. I am also considering attending some acting classes or productions outside of school to gain more experience, if I have the time. I want to rejoin my service, Riding For The Disabled, as I love being with the horses and helping kids. In addition, I want to be more social with my friends as I often spend a lot of time on my own reading.

Keeping Active During Covid-19 Circuit Breaker Measures

LO2: Demonstrate that challenges have been undertaken

LO4: Show commitment to and perseverance in CAS experiences

As all outdoor activities have been cancelled and we’re all required to social distance, I’ve not only had to stop my Kali, mix martial arts, but also my personal trainer and have had to find other ways to keep moving. Thankfully we are fortunate to have our own private pool, and I have been doing aqua aerobics with my family, and also 30 minutes of swimming as often as possible.

Goals:

  • improve core muscles and stamina while increasing heart rate

Challenges:

  • The pool is small and which means I can’t achieve as many strokes per lap as would be possible in a longer pool
  • Having trouble finding a suitable time to do this during weekdays. So far I’m only doing it on the weekends.

 

My Commentary On “Tony Harrison poem, ‘A Cold Coming’,”

1. What is the poem about?
This poem is about the retreating Iraqi soldiers, who were then trapped and bombed by the USA along the “Highway Of Death”
2. How does the poet shock the reader?:

  1. Describes the corps of the body – how it’s all charred to the bone, barely recognisable as the person it used to be
  2. Gives the corps a voice “Isn’t it your sort of pets task to find words for this frightening mask? Id that gadget that you’ve got records words from such scorched vocal cords, press RECORD before some dog devours me mid-monologue.”
  3. The author tries to give some perspective tot he opposing side – get to see through their eyes
  4. The author points out the fact that despite teh army’s being on opposing sides, they have a lot in common. If the soldiers were able to see similarities between each individual, they would have been able to see that they are not so different from each other and their is no reason to fight.
  5. Describes the gruesome deaths, how many people died on the “Highway Of Death”
  6. Describes the dreams of men returning home to their families or starting families of their own being crushed
    1. Shoes the heartbreak of the soldiers families when they learn they died and will never return home

3. How does the poet think Iraqi soldiers have been treated?

  1. Shouldn’t have had to die like that – “the best of fates is not to be” a philosophy made bleak for any but an Ancient Greek, …..when you see men brought to such states who shouldn’t want that “best of fates”
  2. May have been better not to have been born to spare them the pain
  3. Fighting for what they believed in, valued life4.
  4. Fighting to stay alive to make it back to their families

4. Can you identify poetic techniques used?

Rhyme, Similes, Metaphors, Symbolism, Oxymoron?

5. What is the poet’s view of this war?

  1. All war does is bring death and destruction
  2. The men fighting on both sides are the same
    1. They are both fighting for what they believe in
    2. They both have families or want to start families
    3. Both trying to stay alive and go home

6. What is the poet’s overall message?
I believe the poets over all message is that war is pointless, all it does is pave the way for more death, destruction and pain. Not just for the soldiers, but for their families as well. If the soldiers had managed to see past the war, both sides would have been able to see that they are the same, despite the reasons for fighting being slightly different. They both have families, friends, both went to school, both fighting for what they believe in, both made mistakes. In other words, they are human. If they had managed to see past the reason for why the war started and completely accepted each other for who they are and what they believe in, they could have gotten along, and their would be no point of the war starting. This goes for all wars, not just the one in the photo.