“All are equal before the law and are entitled without any discrimination to equal protection of the law. All are entitled to equal protection against any discrimination in violation of this Declaration and against any incitement to such discrimination.” Is the right that I feel is being violated. I believe that the law system is corrupt and does discriminate due to different factors, such as race shown by the various shootings in the United States of black people who didn’t do anything wrong. This is really important because it is peoples lives at stake and these mistakes are going unpunished when innocent people are dying for no reason. The influences that affect me on this issue are mostly the school as I have been shown that it is wrong to have any prejudices and it is wrong to discriminate.
I like how you mention the influences on your perspective and I also like how you add a quote to give strength to your argument. I think something you can do better is elaborating on your points by adding more information.