I thought my paper 1 went quite well. I thought I wrote at a decent standard despite a few spelling mistakes but it has definitely improved from last year, as I have always struggled with my spelling. I needed to relate my ideas more towards the soup and how it is an advertisement rather than just pointing out the issue with it. For next time I just have to keep in mind the purpose of the picture and write more about that, which I feel will push me to that next grade band. I definitely enjoy writing a text like this more than what we have done before.