Mocks Paper 1 Progress (Language and Literature)

  1. How might you embed & unpack examples/ evidence to support your arguments more effectively?
  2. How might you connect on visual elements of the text to support your arguments & deepen your evaluation?
  3. How might you edit for precision in language and terminology

What went well:

  • It was better than I expected.
  • Had more analysis and a set of theme in there

What’s next:

  • Unpacking the visual elements of the text along with the lexical aspects to further strengthen my analysis.
  • Reading more to know the context behind texts
  • Perhaps I need to unapck the context behind to strength my analysis

CA: 4 & 4

CB: 4 & 4

CC: 4 & 4

CD: 4 & 3

Total: 16+15=31 (6)