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Is Odysseus a complicated man?

I agree that to some extent, Odysseus is a complicated character, which can be seen through his naturally deceptive nature. However, by acknowledging the journey that he has undertaken, I find the majority of his decisions reasonable and justifiable. For example, after being sent off by the Phaeacians, Odysseus visits Eumaeus, but disguises himself and creates a story where he has come from Crete. Although Odysseus knows that he is back home in Ithaca, he chooses to lie. I believe that due to his struggle of making his way home, it would be difficult to trust anyone, even those who he knew before the battle of Troy. Perhaps, he believes that everyone and everything is against him, causing him to delay disclosing his true identity to anyone, even those who he used to know so well. Odysseus even questions Penelope’s loyalty and is worried that she might turn against him on his arrival. Odysseus connects this belief with the unfortunate situation that Agamemnon was put in when he arrived back home, where his wife, Clytemnestra took Aegisthus as her lover when he was away. However, when Odysseus reunites with Telemachus at the swineherd’s hurt, he immediately reveals his identity, which contradicts his other decisions where he has chosen to lie until he truly trusts the other person.

Paper 1 Feedback

  • What we choose to write about should act as a magnifying glass in order to show missed details about the poem.

  • They should also be used to make details from the poem more clear, especially when metaphors or figurative language is used.

  • We should not be simply paraphrasing lines from the poem.

NOT TO DO:

  • Don’t just list techniques, explain how they are used effectively to support the deeper meaning.
  • Don’t use two synonyms next to each other as it just adds words but doesn’t actually describe anything.

NOT TO DO:

  • After embedding quotations write the line number next to it.

  • Comment on the title – but not just the literal subject matter.

  • Don’t rely on “connotation” or “imagery” to explain a poem.
    • Unpack the image – how does it reveal a pattern of language? or reveal what is implicit?

  • Mention voice.
  • Recognise the tensions in the poem and the effects on its voice.

Beth Ann Fennelly

Sweet Nothing 

This piece by Fennelly is a lot similar to Fun Home by Alison Bechdel, especially in terms of the style of the writing. In this piece the detailed and observant description of the body is similar to the way that Bechdel describes the bodies in the funeral home. For example, description of the body includes “urine-coloured eyes,” “distended belly,” and “palsied hands.” Additionally, the situation is similar to Fun Home where the father dies and the speaker recalls this moment and thinks about from a future perspective.

Married Love

Fennelly’s pieces also reflect similar themes to Sappho of love, and shows a slight progression in terms of marriage life; going from the sublime, referring to the fantasy and intimacy of new marriage to the banal, referring to the everyday life situations that she encounters.