General (Class) Feedback:
- Mentioning writers
- Genre-specific terms
- Cohesion – a developing line of argument
Specific Feedback
- Technical terms: Foil
- You maintain an insightful comparative approach here
- Focus on craft: Shamsie characterises Isma as…
- So, maintain focus on writers to ensure your analysing their craft AND technical terms – these will be helpful prompts for your 10
Target: Maintain focus on writer to analyse craft and technical terms