After handing in my EE first draft I had my reflective conversation 2 with my EE supervisor. During my meeting with my supervisor, my supervisor gave me some constructive factor on the things I need to work on. She went through my EE and said there are some grammatical errors that I need to work on as what I want to say is not coming out properly. Also, I need to work on my sentence construction as my sentences are too long and don’t make sense sometimes.
Looking more on content my EE supervisor suggested to me include a balanced view of both the book as I use a lot of evidence is used from one book and the other is partially mentioned. I also need to make strong arguments by using evidence from the book. I also need to focus on citing my evidence as few of the evidence was not cited properly.